Learning Poems!

In english class we are learning different poems and how to right them. This is one of mine, I’m not sure if I like it yet……but I’d like other people to tell me what they think.

I AM…..
I am the sun and the moon.
I wonder if they can live without each other.
I hear the sun awakening the world.
I see the moon lull it to sleep.
I want the red horizon to match the glistening silver night beacon.
I am the sun and the moon.
 

I pretend I don’t see them change.
I feel the warmth and the cold,
I touch
I cry in the beauty of the setting sun and the calming of the night.
I worry night won’t come.
I am the sun and the moon.
 

I understand their history.
I say there must be something between them.
I dream of seeing them eclipse together.
I try to watch the radiance of the sun and glistening silver of the moon.
I hope it will always take my breath away.
I am the sun and the moon.

Thanks for reading.